Aramoro - fire mage [Declined - Pending re-write]

Character Name:
Aramoro
Race:
blood elf
Class:
mage
Level:
80
Talents explain your spec why you are this spec ! :
0/53/18
Professions:
tailoring 430
Armory link:
http://eu.wowarmory.com/character-sheet.xml?r=Laughing+Skull&n=Aramoro
Usual Play Times:
17:00 - 24: 00
Avaliable for Raiding - Times/Days:
every day
Raid Experience (All - Vanilla/BC):
TK 3/4 SSC 5/6 MH 3/5 and in WOTLK naxx spider wing cleared and i have killed sartharion and the boss in wintergrasp
What guilds have you been in previously? why u left / got kicked :
i have been in sticky fingers , catastrophe and some other smaller guilds i left because all of them disbaned........
Alts
only a DK
Real Life Age:
16
Additional Information

Why Atonement?:
i need a guild in which i can find some friends and do some raids
Do you understand what type of guild we are and what we will expect from you?:
yes
Do you have a Microphone and use Ventrilo?:
yes
What can only you bring to Atonement?:
the most imba dps in Azeroth and also a good friend.

Wow

Please edit you're application and give us a bit more information.
Explain youre specc/talents and why you like it.
Maybe some info on who you are hobby's/school/work/etc...

This is you're first impression and the only information we have to consider to take you in the guild.

there isnt much to explain about my spec its the best pve spec for mages atm .
in rl i hate school and my hobby is playing wow. ( i am not really good in making applications)

You should make your application easyer to read, by adding space between the lines.
Its not very informative and it seems like you havent used more than 1 min on typing this.
You should also try to fill in each category more, for eksample: Talents: you simply say 0/53/18
Remember that not all players are mages, and this application is the only reference we got of you.
Try to sell yourself better, look at accepted players aswell as declined. Take some ideas.
However your gear looks fine!

Best luck to you.

Indeed this is one of the worst applications so far.

I would suggest to increase you're chances of an invite to re-write this and at least spend a little time telling us a bit more about youreself. You might want to include things like, you're professions, you're alts if any, how long you have played WoW and maybe some other RL interests or whatever.

I'm sure you're raid experience is fine, but the main thing you must remember is that none of the people reading this know you, and you need to stand out for a chance of an invite.



Declined

Pending a re-write.